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Okay, so for those of you who don't really watch anime, then this won't apply to you. But I'm sure pretty much all of you have heard about Sailor Moon and Cardcaptor Sakura. Maybe some of you have even heard of Pretty cure?

But anyway, I'm making a MG manga of my own (it's like everytime you read my journal I'm doing something! HAHA!), and I was watching some of the other MG anime, and I found on EVERY SINGLE ONE, at least ONE of these sterotypes. So I'm writing this journal to rant, and to point stuff out!

**Note: There are tons of MG anime out there. Some are darker and scarier than others. This doesn't apply to ALL MG anime, it's just something I've noticed as I've been watching and I've been watching a LONG time.

Here we go!

EDIT: Just because I mention a certain show/manga does not mean by ANY means that I'm bashing it. Honestly, I love them all! I even like the fanimes on youtube! I only mention them for example's sake! SO please don't be offended C=

Also, just because I'm writing this doesn't mean that you have to listen to anything I'm saying. You can use all the sterotypes if you want. These are only some things that I've noticed, so that others can try to change them and hopefully make another legendary MG anime C=.  


#1.) The Main character MUST be the prepy, happy-go-lucky one with blond hair and/or pigtails. She must be everyone's friend, cute, clumsy, and loud. How else will we hypnotize the crowd with her kawaii-desuness?????

Why this doesn't work: This image of the magical girl has been over-used so many times that it's become the norm, or standard for many mahokka; and now it's become a sterotype. This is the magical GIRL, not magical CLONE. Why can't she be short and emo with boyish purple hair? Why can't she be a race (no offense to anyone) other than Japanese? Why can't she be a blue alien from the plant of HappyLand and Sugar Attacks? Why can't she be anti-social? Girls come in every shape, way and form. The central idea of the MG is more often than not be some kind of role-model. So if every girl looks at a MG anime and sees this type of character, what are they going to think? "I have to look like that to be Magical!" "My character has to act like that to be magical!" etc. Not good, not good. Sterotypes leave no room for originality.

#2.) The team MUST be all female and transform into Super kawaii-desu, itty-bitty miniskirts, and have loads of panty-shots and fanservice. After all, we HAVE to impress the lolicons and fanboys, right?!

Why this doesn't work: Ignoring the sarcasm. You can make an all girl team work very well. Most people do. In fact, it might not even be able to be called an MG anime if it weren't for all the girls coming together with the power of friendship to kick bad-guy ass! BUUUUUT...I personally think, that MG animes shouldn't necessarily have to be completely Devoid of guys all the time. I'm not talking about the obnoxious magical boy who appears oh-so conveniently when the MG and all her teammates are on the brink of death. No, I mean have a guy as actually PART of the team. It would be wierd right? But maybe what the MG genre needs is a little change? Again, you can make an all-girl team work just fine. Just make sure the teammates aren't stereotyped either. Oh! And remember, the lolicons have a FIELD day with all girls teams.      

#3.) The Magical Girl MUST have some kind of cute, adorable pet who is NOT from the world, and knows everything the magical girl must do to save the world beforehand. This way, the pet can help her when she's in a pinch, right???

Why it doesn't work: Now, I'm not telling you that ALL mascots are bad. In fact, the little rascals are usually very cute! But the whole pet thing has cliche and overused written all over it in permanent marker. What urks me personally about the whole pet thing is that the pet usually knows everything.
"What should I do to transform???"
"Say This This and This!"
"Where could the magical key of magnificent power be???"
"I don't know, but my senses which have never sensed the key's presence prior to this moment are suddenly tingling, and I can sense them in the caves of Wonderousland!!!"  
What if the pet wasn't a pet, but a human, or an alien, or a plant? Maybe the pet is some kind of cell-phone? What if the pet was secretly the BAD guy? What if the "pet" was the MG girl's shadow come to life?!?!? I don't know! This is FANTASY! Last I checked, fantasy required IMAGINATION!

4.) The magical girl'd friends??? OH! OH! I know! Pick me! Pick! They act like thisandthisandthisandthisandthis...

Why it doesn't work: Okay, so the above was kind of vauge, but the point I was trying to make is that the character traits can be easily pinpointed and copied into another character, but I think all of you MG fans can guess what I'm talking about. Tell me if I'm wrong, but we all know what the typical MG teams consists of, whether the team has 1 member, or 12. There is the smart one, the tomboy, the one that's as equally annoying as the main character, the semi-emo one, the bitch, the enthusiast, the shy one, etc. I know of the MG I've watched, they all contain one or more of these sterotypical characters. Now, I have no problem with any of these characters, but there ARE other personalities than these.

The characters in MG anime can have these traits, but the problem is that the creators make these character traits really obvious and easy to pinpoint, all the more making them easy to spot and tire of quickly. The idea is to make loveable characters that you can fall in love with, and make the characters seem real. So what better way than to base their personalities off of real people? Like your friends or siblings or even a famous person that you like. How about the crazy aunt who asks you questions and already knows the answer? Or the two sided girl who seems friendly outside, but is secretly very competitive and jealous of the main character? How about the one that has absolutely no tolerance for failure? Maybe even a GAL (gyaru) character, or a yankee, or maybe even a ganguro???

Study people that you are close to and try to incorporate their personality into that of your character. Even if the trait seems boring, a large array of traits make the characters dynamic. I have yet to see a magical girl anime (That's not dark or scary, not that I've watched any of those besides maybe madoka magica) that doesn't have a main character with a sailor moon personality: Clumsy, high-pitched, fights for her friends, lazy, and all together an attempt at a kawaii-desu main character. So, please, for the sake of the future generations, please mix up your characters and give more girls a character to relate to. (I mean the older fangirls of the series. Younger fans don't really understand the purpose of personalities. They just watch for the pretty colors and sparkles.)

EDIT 12/1/12: I'm adding more! YAY!

The villains must either be OLD oba-sans with creepy magic powers, or Dudes! And the enemy ALWAYS has to be an adult! No kids! No teens! The villains must have a group of SUB-villains that kiss the big villains ass and are willing to die for the Boss at the drop of a hat. Eventually, ALL the villains will have to die! WE TAKE NO PRISONERS IN THE MAGICAL WORLD!!! >=C

Why this doesn't work: Ever since Sailor Moon came out with the 4 kings of heaven and the demons and minons they had (which were all FEMALE), there has been a bit of a "formula" for creating the bad guy team.

It goes something like this chain: Overlord baddie> Leader Baddie> Leader's Pawns baddie > Minions of Minions Pawns baddie

:bulletblue:For example in Tokyo Mew Mew it's: Deep Blue, The Aliens, and then the Chimeras.

:bulletblue:For example in Sailor Moons it's: Queen Metalia, Queen Beryl, The Shitennou, and the youma/monsters/minions of the Shitennou.

Okay, so OBVIOUSLY, there is no force without a leader, so none of the "formula's" are bad per se. It's just that they keep getting USED. It's the same with Most of the MG I've watched other than Pretear and Madoka Magica. SPOILER:In Pretear, there was only one "villain." She was a woman, and yes, just like most of the women villains in MG she was turned into a "good person" at the end of the fight between the Heroine and the baddie. In Madoka Magica, the world was being run by a mass of evil witches. They had no leader. They were like deadly germs or something; Always making more of themselves and causing lots of sinister problems on Earth.

But anyway, I kind of find it humorous how the sub-baddies working for the leader baddie are all usually very loyal, never disrespect their commander, go out and die and then just get replaced by the next in line. And then the leader baddie spits on their graves. How rude! You'd think you'd have a bit more respect for someone whose throwing themselves in the front lines on behalf of YOUR lazy ass!

*clears throat* But anyway, what if there was an instance when the leader baddie became the sub-baddie of the sub-baddies? What if the sub-baddies had a revolution and totally turned on their leader? What if something happened amongst the baddies and they all split up, and went to torment the magical girls for their own personal reasons? How cool would THAT be? Like one minute you're fighting the baddie that's trying to destroy all human life, when suddenly the baddies that USED to be working with THAT baddie, jump out of nowhere and start attacking the magical girl, JUST because they want them dead and they see their death as the only way to..ehm...complete? Their plans. It would be like a never-ending struggle for the MG, and plus, it would give more depth to the villain, rather than just making them to be the main baddies Bitch.

The library session ends soon, and I'm nowhere near done, but here's some final pointers. Pity I didn't get to point of the stereotypes of the characters in the all female team, the sterotype of the villains, blah blah. Here. I leave you with this...

No matter what you do, your MG is bound to be compared to Sailor Moon, but for God's sakes, don't add fuel to fire with sterotypes!!!

#1.) Every single Magical Girl anime with three or more girls transforming and kicking bad-guy ass, is AUTOMATICALLY a Sailor Moon Copy by default. Don't try to deny it! Just admit you copied already!!!

Why this doesn't work: I don't care how original and wonderful your story is. Every single anime/manga is always compared to another anime/manga. (ex. bleach vs. Naruto and Sailor Moon vs. every single MG anime on Earth.) But since this is about MG, then anything and everything is compared to Sailor Moon! It's so ANNOYING! Look, people, I understand that Sailor Moon was a huge hit and all, but that was over 20 years ago. Can we please move on?!?!  And it's not entirely Sailor Moon's fault that everything is compared to her. If you look at a lot of the MG anime, they're pretty uniform in the way they create and advance their stories. All MG are different. I don't need anyone comparing SM to the Winx Club/W.I.T.C.H/every season of Pretty Cure ever made/Pretear/etc. stop. Really. Just stop.

I'll edit this later.

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KieranHighlawn Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I've always liked the idea of younger villains. I always think of how much fun I could have with their outfits.
fobia8 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015  Student Writer
You may be surprised but I have an idea for a manga. Its drama/adventure/horror/comedy/slice of life/high school with magical girl. Yea, I know what you think but it is not about typical kawaii/cute/moe/pathetic girl. My magical girl is like teenage version of Morticia Addams - tall, creepy, sexy almost completely in black who is smart and not lazy. Her friends differ one from other and also things they like but they like and respect her. As for villans they would be of various age and of both genders. I am not trying to copy any manga, only trying to crrate something original. Right now its just a idea for a manga and I am in process of earning points to pay the people interested in drawing manga. But I want to know what do you think about my idea for a manga.
pikapi181 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for this journal. I planing to make a series like magical girl anime , but this will make me make sure I don't fall into those stereo types. Thanks for everything! 
GamingFan1997 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Student Digital Artist
No offense, but... have you heard of Puella Magi Madoka Magica?
BlissClouds Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I have. I think i even mentioned it in the journal.
PrincessNerdBunny Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
There is another magical girl stereotype. In every episode, the leader villian ALWAYS sends monsters to defeat the MG. She always has to fight them,and despite the fact that she beats them every time, the villian never seems to come up with a new plan. It is so cliche and annoying. -.-
BlissClouds Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Student Digital Artist
That's true xD 
I guess its just for the sake of giving the heroine someone to fight. Can't be a hero if there's no danger, ya know? 
PrincessNerdBunny Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Exactly. Another MG stereotype I came up with are those long transformations. You would've thought the villian would destroy an entire town by the time the MG was done transforming. It takes even longer when they say their MG speech.
BlissClouds Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
lol I've thought of that too. One theory I've heard is that the transformation is actually slowed down and in reality it's much faster. But personally I like longer transformations. But as for the MG speeches yeah I think that they're pretty...extra xD I actually did see an episode of wedding peach where the villain interrupted Momoko's transformation by shooting something at her and I was amazed xDD 
HirotaMizuki117 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I actually plan to make a series where the lead is a cold and blunt anti-heroine MG.She fights for her own cause but she still sides true justice.She doesn't hesitate to put others into risks due to her confidence of her abilities that she'll be able to win anyways(though that's not the case all the time,of course) and sometimes become a neutral party by the side instead.

Her partner starts off as a rival who sees her as a threat and destroyer rather than a saviour and usually ends up getting in the lead's way of fighting since she views it as endangering others rather than saving.But since both of them are fighting against the same villains,they sometimes ended up teaming up and working together to fight.The partner has a mentality of "You can't die until I defeat you" as her reason to team up with her.

Is it a bit too far-fetched for a MG anime plot?Please share your thoughts on it!And I welcome suggestions too. :3
BlissClouds Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
So basically, the lead is an anti-hero who doesn't care for the well-being of others because she's confident in herself yet still favors justice, but can also be neutral?

The partner doesn't have the greatest opinions about the lead, and thinks that she's endangering other people's lives, but still teams up with her anyway because they're fighting the same enemy and because she would rather get rid of the main herself? 

Hmmm...well, what you have given me so far isn't a plot. It's more of a character description. I still don't know who enemy is. Also, the fact that the main character has the ability to be neutral in certain situations means that there is more than one opposing force. So who are these forces? That's the main question. I think that this kind of partnership is a tricky one because its kind of different. It's like two rivals/enemies partnering up, so naturally I don't expect them to have the greatest synergy, which might also make for a few comedic clashes!And maybe even a few serious mishaps? It would also be interesting to see how the two interact outside of a battle setting. Seeing them grow as a team and work together could also be rewarding.

Feel free to elaborate on the plot if you want~ I'd be more than happy to offer suggestions.

Good luck on your story~
Ribbon-San Featured By Owner Edited Oct 24, 2014

There's a few other stereotypes you didn't mention:

  1. When the heroine’s Magical Girl form looks the same as her civilian form, and no one notices. It makes less work for the character designers, and can make things look less cluttered, but it still sucks. At least have her wear a mask, or have different colored hair and eyes.
  2. The heroine ALWAYS wears pink. Even though none of the four Magical Girl pioneers (Sally, Akko, Cutey Honey, and Sailor Moon) wore pink.
  3. The heroine is a brainless moron who has no talents, skills, or redeeming qualities except for her pure and loving heart. Just because Usagi did it doesn't mean it ALWAYS has to be done! 
  4. The whole Plot Coupon/Gotta Catch Them All thing. This one can work if the MacGuffins have a practical use (like in Cardcaptor Sakura), but a lot of shows seem to use it purely because they can’t think of any other way to drive the plot.
BlissClouds Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You strike a very good point!

1.) You're right, that never did make any sense to me. It makes the villains look pretty brainless too imo~

2.) I can't believe I didn't mention the pink thing! That is pretty much all I see in Magical Girls these days -- I have no idea why it became a thing? Probably because in Japan, the hero of a group typically wears the color red -- and pink is the more feminine shade of red? It's still a liiiittle bit cliched though.

3/4.) How did I not mention those? Especially the 4th one o.o

Thank you for bringing those up, I'll be sure to mention them should I ever find the time to re-write this journal.
KawaiiJoltic Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is helpful. Thank you! Kind of makes me feel like my idea to have the more serious girl be the protagonist in mine is original. Is it? I don't watch that many magical girl animes. 
BlissClouds Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It would definitely be a breath of fresh air! 
KawaiiJoltic Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome! Glad you'd think so. Also, I'm curious, I've seen at least one Magical Girl anime where an older brother is a prominent character, but how common is a prominent younger brother to the main character?
BlissClouds Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I've seen in many cases that its kind of rare for the main character to have siblings at all. So I say go for it. C:
KawaiiJoltic Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. =D
flareose Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
This is all so very true, so good job!

I was working on a Magical Boy fan fic, so this was an eye opener for me in understanding what not to do. So thanks bro :D
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SophiaDahlen Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think this is how it usually goes:The main character is the clumsy,ditzy,energetic girl who is everyones best friend.Her favorite color can sometimes be red,but more often than not,it's pink.She is always the most powerful one.The second one is usually the blue one.Her powers often have something to do with water,snow,or ice.She is the rich and/or popular girl.The third one is the green one.She's either a tomboy or the smart and/or shy girl.And if you see a purple girl with either purple or black long hair,she might either be the serious lone wolf,or the one who always picks on the main heroine(if it's not the blue one who picks on the main girl).
BlissClouds Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
That's pretty much spot on .w. the second one is almost always blue without fail. And I find that more often than not, that character is associated with being super smart. And yeah, the purple girl is a typical tsun, and I have noticed that they're always very quiet, serious, or just distant. It's kinda funny. I've never seen the main charatcer get picked on by her teammate since Usagi and Raye. Usually, the teammates are kissing the main character's ass .w. there is the ocassional breath of fresh air where that doesn't happen though.
The green girls I've seen have mostly been tomboys. Of some sort, or not even included at all.
SophiaDahlen Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eternal-II Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student General Artist
True this at the last part. I'm so sick and tired of people using sailor moon as a strong hold whenever another magical girl comes out that's obviously very different from the sailor moon series. The ignore the different and focuses on what looks simular.

About the sterotypes, a lot of times it can't really be avoided if you make characters in general. What *can* be avoided however, is what you make your character do and what you make your character act like. What if your character wears the color black because that's their favorite color? What if the character likes the emo fashion /gothic lolita fashion because she or he finds beauty within it? A lot of times the sterotyping comes in based on what the person wears/likes/does. If anyone sees a touch of resemblance to anything that says sterotype, the person automatically goes "MARY SUE!" without understanding the full 410 of the character's background and personality.

While we are on the subject, another that irks me is when people just pick one trait for their characters and then wonder why they get called mary sues, even if they are given a fault, if the character is flat tossed along with the well known sterotypes then it's just boring. But if you flesh out the characters and make them "real", then the character is no longer a sterotype but a character that we run into every day, a character that we live with and interact with in real life.

ANOOOTHER thing that bothers me is when people teach you shit in the how to draw anime books, and say "this is a must" or "draw this and you get this! LOL!". To me it doesn't teach anything, to me that's copying and hindering your creativity process.

Story creating is about creativity and uniqueness, it's free flowing and people who make stories should feel free to make whatever character they want without feeling ridiculed or pressured for it.  If you wanna make a character with rainbow hair, make a character with rainbow hair!! Just.... if you do, make the character real, and give her real eye colors, real personalities, real life situations, make the character based off your best friend or something! Don't just make a shiny desu girl with everything rainbows... that gets a little dull and annoying. :]

If you need anymore things added to your journal feel free to borrow any of these, I don't mind. I'm just a random person browsing through looking for writing and character creation types for the fantasy/magical girl genre.

BlissClouds Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for your input! :D
What this journal needs is a little rewrite I think ^^;

Interesting point about the sterotypes. And I feel your distaste for the carbon copying of traits. o.o I think my beef with the [Magical Girl]  animes I have watched is that the main character is just that. A flat character given a fault. It especially urks me when the teammates go on to praise this main character as if they were more than just that. Not all of them do this of course. If a character is really as amazing as they're supposed to be, then they won't need teammates to point that out. A dynamic character can speak for itself -- at least I think so. ^^

Yes! Although a lot of people say that "nothing orignal comes out anymore, everything's copied from something, blah blah blah," That might be true, but that's no excuse to just say "f*** it" and toss out a generic story without even trying. The whole "bad guy vs. good guy" will never get old. But without innovation, it will get boring. And yes, enough of the desu girls o.o pleeeease.

Thanks again for reading my journal! ^O^

Eternal-II Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student General Artist
No problem! And another tip I have is to avoid making your stories sound like "Sailor MOON! OMG!" Avoid planetary anything (zodiacs, planet names, etc etc *cough*Laura Faust*COUGH*) , and avoid designing simular outfits. Just because it's a magical girl doesn't mean that she needs to look like a fricken sailor, yet whenever people out there make "how to do magical girl" tutorials they always say "sailor outfits and long frilly bows!" *COUGH*CHRIS HART*COUGH* (he does this often in his how to magical girl tutorials).

Another tip you can add to this journal is to avoid "sailor moon" sounding villains , give them a motivation and look up research on criminal motivation/ criminal behavior. What causes criminals to do what they do. It needs to be something other than "MWAHAHHHAA I WANNA GET RID OF EVERYTHING BECAUSE I HAVE THE POWER TO DO IT". Sadly a lot of these magical girls fall into this trap. Sailor Moon being the first to do so though I'm kinda glad she was the first; now when I write stories I know what to avoid to make it seem more realistic. xD
carbonatedRain Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So of course if I'm trying to come up with my own magical girl character, I probably shouldn't use these traits. ^^'
But if I just want to parody them, it's okay to use these, fizzdrop? :3
Just so it's recognizable.
BlissClouds Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
But of course :D

There's actually an anime I believe that parodies the sterotypes of Magical Girls. I forget its name, but I heard it was hilarious~

But yeah, for parody purposes, be my guest! :iconyoyoranranruuplz:
carbonatedRain Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, cool. :D
And yay! Thank you, fizzdrop. ^w^
Ael-GN Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
Thanks for writing this. It's actually helpful for people who wants to do some Magical Girl.
And your ideas are really interesting : a guy (a real one, not a shota) in the team ? The heroine's shadow as a "magical help" ? This is brilliant :)
BlissClouds Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh! Thank you for your feedback! The article isn't done, but I'm glad you took the time to read it! Thanl you! <3
Ael-GN Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
No problem ;)
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